Sunday, November 15, 2009

How to avoid health fraud

There are many ways to avoid health fraud. First, distribute a specialist health groupgroup.Government is responsible to distribute a specialist health group to places such as private hospitals to discover what kind of drug they have, and how safe they are to be given for ill people. Second , check the medicine wether it is from safe source or not recheck the contents with the pharmacy if it contains harmful compound and if it is not suitable for our agenot suitable for our age that maybe it harms use in the future.Finally,arrest the cheaters . Arresting the cheaters of those who seals harmful drug there can be many victims resulting from those fraud medicine.
These is some ways to avoid health fraud.


Amal AL-Nasser

1 comment:

  1. Thanks, Amal for posting your homework assignment.

    Feedback:

    1) Please try to use the new words you learned in our lesson today.

    2) Also, check out Reading 1, A Miracle Cure, to get more information about the topic.

    3) In your sentence: " distribute specialist health group.", what do you mean by "specialist health group", and who should distribute them?!!

    4) In your sentence: "Distributing health group to checkout these places who is trying to fraud people's health.", what places are you talking about?!! Please clarify. Also, "fraud" is a noun NOT a verb; so, please fix your sentence, accordingly.

    5) In your sentence: "Checking the source of the medicine before using it and check the contents.", how can you check whether the product is real or not? Can you do it yourself? If yes, how?

    6) "Cheats" is a verb, and you can't use Verbs as Objects!!! Please use the new words you have learned today.

    7) You have learned new words for "not allowed", please use one of them.

    8) What do you mean by saying: "those who seals unallowed drug compounds"?!! (Did you use Google Translator?!)

    Please rewrite your paragraph after you finish reading my feedback.


    Thank you for your work, Amal..

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